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I'm the girl you never tossed a second glance to.
The same you didn't dare speak to.
The girl who got picked on and bullied.
Whos clumsy nature only made it worse.
But you didn't care,no one did.

You didn't bother to help her bare her sorrows.
To shoulder the weight of the world when you're weightless.
No one did.

In the long run you were just a bystander.
A person mearly passing through.
But you could have been something to her,you could have saved my life.

But,hey,who cares about one girl you only saw once or twice around school?
If anyone did,her picture wouldn't have turned up on the news as suicide.
And her soul wouldn't linger around,trying to find a reason.
A reason as to why no one cared.
©2008-2009 ~Jagger-moon
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Author's Comments

Wrote this in health when watching a movie on people getting drunk and how it's bad for you....i hate health.It's not like you're just one day going to deside to go out,get drunk,and drive into a lake!Anyways,i've been obsessing over sad stories that get passed around the school and this was just one that came up about a girl who comited suicide so i thought i would write about it.Creepy and weird yes but i'm just different like that....i'll try to type some happy stuff 'k?

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its really good! Im surprised no one acutally commented yet O_O... or am i a freak of natureXD,,, LOL
i love the writting style (and the big word. bystander? wow when was the last time i heard THAT word)
it'd be cool if someone made a comic base on this. mini comic or not itd be ... sweet?not the right word wtv

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~ 의 꿈이의 바람애 사라진다 . . . B y e B y e
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Really?Thx!Yay first comment!:3.Comic,now that's a different thought.Never even crossed my mind but i supose it would be sweet.

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"For every man that wants to rule the world, there will be a man that just wants to be free" - Nerina Pallot

I'm not Crazy! Just insanely delightful!!

"If love is a drug I guess we're all sober. If hope is a song I guess its all over." - Nerina Pallot

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